Role guide

The HR Director resume,
and the workforce number that moved.

HR holds the cleanest data in the company and writes the vaguest resume in it. The page describes what was launched, an engagement survey, a leadership programme, a new HRIS, and stops short of the workforce number that changed afterwards. A chief people officer reads for the second thing, because the first is a calendar entry.

6Metrics that land
3Lines rewritten
7Weighted dimensions
16Evidenced assets
How it should read EVIDENCED
Ran hiring for a 1,400-person region: 310 hires a year at a median 34 days to fill, down from 61. Agency-sourced hires fell from 38%…TRACED
Delivered a 420-role reduction across 6 sites in 16 weeks, including 60 days of consultation with two works councils: $6.2M one-time…TRACED
Built succession cover for 28 critical roles: ready-now candidates from 6 to 19 over two years, with two-deep cover on 21 of the 28.…TRACED
The read

What a CHRO checks before reading the summary

HR Director covers three mandates that rarely swap. A business partner sits inside an operating unit and is measured on what that unit's workforce does. A centre of excellence lead owns talent acquisition, reward or learning across the whole company and is measured on a system. A country lead carries local employment law, a works council or a recognised union, and a group framework written somewhere else. The page should settle which one within the first few lines.

The next test is whether you were in the room. Restructures, senior pay decisions and executive exits are settled by a small group, and a resume can be read to see whether you belonged to that group or heard the outcome later. A consultation you ran yourself, a settlement you negotiated, a works council you sat opposite: these place you inside the decision. Programme names do not.

01

Population supported with its mix. Headcount, sites, countries, and the split between salaried, hourly, unionised and contingent. Nine hundred plant operators and nine hundred software engineers are not the same function.

02

Which mandate you held: business partner to an operating P&L, owner of a centre of excellence, or country lead applying a group framework under local law.

03

Whether you sat on the leadership team of the business you supported, and whether pay decisions ended with you or travelled to a group reward function.

04

Industrial relations exposure, named. A recognised union, a works council, a wage settlement you negotiated, a tribunal you defended, a site closure that ran to its consultation timetable.

Evidence

Numbers HR already owns and rarely uses

Every figure below already sits in the HRIS, the applicant tracking system or the case log. HR Directors omit them because the function is trained to speak about people carefully and a bare number feels blunt. A bare number is what the reader came for, and its absence is taken as an absence of results rather than as discretion.

01

Regretted and unregretted attrition reported separately, because total attrition can fall while the people you wanted to keep leave and everyone else settles in.

02

Time to fill and cost per hire with the agency share stated, because that share is what says whether you built a hiring capability or rented one from a contingency firm.

03

Offer-acceptance rate with the decline reasons behind it, because it is the fastest read available on whether pay bands and the interview process hold up in the markets you were hiring in.

04

Engagement movement with a baseline, a response rate and the same instrument used twice, because a score missing any of those three cannot be compared with anything.

05

Employee relations caseload per thousand employees, average closure time, and how many outcomes survived appeal, because this is the part of HR most likely to end up in front of a judge.

06

Restructuring given as one-time cost against annualised saving, with the number redeployed rather than exited, because the redeployment figure is what shows the exercise was run properly.

Blind spots

The claims that never carry a figure

Three sentences recur at this level. Each describes activity the function is expected to perform, which is exactly why they add nothing. The reader assumes the programme happened and is waiting to hear what it did to the workforce.

"Rolled out a new performance management framework." A framework is a document until something moves. Give the rating distribution before and after calibration, how many low performers were managed out, and the promotion rate that followed.

"Championed diversity and inclusion across the organisation." Championing is a posture. State representation at a named layer on two dates, and which of the three levers moved it: hiring, promotion or attrition.

"Reduced attrition through targeted retention initiatives." Attrition also falls when the labour market freezes. Name the cohort, the regretted rate at both ends, and what you actually changed: pay, manager quality, career path or shift pattern.

Same claim, twice

Three lines, rewritten.

The same fact, made checkable. Every figure is illustrative of the shape an evidenced line takes — nothing here is invented on your behalf.

The claim on the left is not wrong. It is simply unreadable as evidence: nothing in it can be checked, compared or priced. The version on the right makes the same statement in a form a search partner can act on.

As written

Led talent acquisition for the region, hiring across multiple functions and seniority levels.

Evidenced

Ran hiring for a 1,400-person region: 310 hires a year at a median 34 days to fill, down from 61. Agency-sourced hires fell from 38% to 9% after building a four-person internal sourcing team, cost per hire from $4,900 to $2,100, and offer acceptance rose from 71% to 88% once pay bands were rebuilt against two market surveys.

What changed. Volume alone describes a busy year. The agency share is the line that proves capability was built rather than bought, and acceptance rate is the one figure a chief people officer will test at interview.
As written

Managed a company-wide restructuring exercise with minimal disruption to the business.

Evidenced

Delivered a 420-role reduction across 6 sites in 16 weeks, including 60 days of consultation with two works councils: $6.2M one-time cost against $14.5M annualised saving, and 96 people redeployed into open roles. Two tribunal claims filed, both withdrawn, and no site lost a production shift.

What changed. Minimal disruption cannot be tested. A cost against a saving, a redeployment count and a claims outcome can be, and volunteering the claims is what makes the rest of the paragraph credible.
As written

Developed succession plans for critical leadership roles across the business.

Evidenced

Built succession cover for 28 critical roles: ready-now candidates from 6 to 19 over two years, with two-deep cover on 21 of the 28. Of 9 leadership vacancies in the following 18 months, 7 were filled internally, against 2 of the previous 11.

What changed. A succession plan is a spreadsheet until a vacancy arrives. The internal fill rate over the period that followed is the only evidence that the bench was real.

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